Poetry Competition 2010

 
Poetry competition - top of poster

Congratulations and thank you to everyone who took part in this year's poetry competition. In the international learners' categories there were 753 entries, from 31 different countries!

You can read all the winning poems on the Children's Poetry Bookshelf website, and we are very happy and proud to publish the winning poems from the international competition here. The quality and level of the poems is amazing, so well done to you all! 

Winners in 7-8 age group, International Learners of English

Home

By Ishu Gupta, aged 8, from India (first prize)

My sweet home! My sweet home!
I love my home! I love my home!

If wind comes who will protect me?
If winter comes who will protect me?

My home, my home nice for me.
My home, my home a temple for me.

If summer comes who will protect me?
If rain comes who will protect me?

My home, my home best for me.
My home, my home a mosque for me.

If night comes who will shelter me?
If storm comes who will shelter me?

My home, my home is good for me.
A majestic creation of Thee.


There is no place like house, home

By Melanie Duarte Sanchez, aged 8, from Mexico (second prize)

There are many things we call a house,
Like small dark holes in the walls for the noisy mouse.

Tall windy nests in the trees are what flying birds like the most,
But dirty deep holes in the ground are cosy for rabbits and moles.

Dogs and kittens sleep in soft pillows,
And little spiders make webs in the corners of some windows.

Crocodiles and snakes enjoy muddy swamps,
But beavers prefer to build their own dams.

Fish and whales live in the wet blue sea,
And wood or brick buildings are houses for you and me.
But what really matters is:
To have a home where you can feel safe and free.


Different Home

By Tong Ho Kan Kenny, aged 8 from Hong Kong (third prize)

One man,
he has a home.
It is a bus,
because he is a bus driver.

One old man,
He has no home,
because he is a ghost.

One super man,
he has a home.
It is the space!


My Darling Home

By Ada Ciontu, aged 7, from Romania (highly commended)

When I go home,
I eat, I sleep,
I colour, I bother
And no-one minds.

I watch TV
And get a treat,
Even I trick.

I take a shower,
Put on a flower,
Pull out my baby teeth
And smile a bit.

When I feel blue,
Mom and Dad “moo”,
And you can see my smile,
Out from a mile.

Oh, I love my darling home,
Where everybody loves me
Just the way I am.


Home for Everyone

By Bohdan Meleshko, aged 7, from the Ukraine (highly commended)

My home’s a country house,
my teacher’s home’s a flat
a hole’s a home for a mouse,
a snail’s home’s on its back.
All beings have their own homes.
Homes can be big or small.
I am so sorry for all those
who have no home at all.
The world will be more fun
if there’s a home for everyone!


 Winners in 9-11 age group, International Learners of English

A house we built together

By Cristina Vrincianu, aged 11, from Romania (first prize)

Our house is a house.
We built it together.
We have laid every brick one by one.
We have nailed every board, one blow at a time.
Our house is a house.
We built it together.

Not every board is perfect, some are not even straight.
Some walls are built in the wrong place.
We must carefully remove those boards
We must carefully remove those walls.

We must rebuild them in the right place.
We must replace each board one by one
Until the holes are all filled
Until all the walls are in the right place.

When we have finished
We can stand back and say
“This is our house,
A house we built together!” 


“Home – my friend”

By Mikolaj Marsy, aged 11, from Poland (second prize)

My walls are yellow like sunrays in the morning
My roof is red like maple leaves in Autumn
My door is brown like sweet chocolate boiling
My windows – limping like lakes in the mountains.

I’m as old as your grandpa who’s collecting stamps
I’m as safe as the money in Swiss banks
I’m as happy as your best friends
I’m as warm as flames in the fireplace.

I don’t want to leave you
I like when you are in
I hate when you go out
I love when we are near.


Home?

By Anastasi Panagiotopoulou, aged 9, from Greece (third prize) 

For a fox, it’s its den,
For a snail, it’s its shell,
For a bird, it’s the sky,
For me, it’s my school.
You’re probably wondering why.
Am I a fool?
I come from a broken family.
My school makes me feel like a baby kangaroo
in its pouch.
Safe, warm and wanted.
School, sweet school...


Moon in the Sky

By Pablo Vincent, aged 11, from France (highly commended) 

Flowers in the sitting room,
Rain in the garden
lights off
I’m in bed


 I dream a house

By Lorenzo Di Biagio and Luca Oleari, aged 10, from Italy

I go to the supermarket and I write a list.
I buy a golden wall,
an ice door
and seven floors.
A diamond chair,
a collection of Montblanc pens.
A fire disc,
a metal chimney
a silver roof.
An orange fridge
an LED 4D TV.
A rock window.
A chocolate table,
a water armchair, a pair of pears
A crystal bed and a good dad.


 


 

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Comments

TurquoisePetal2000's picture

fab poems
what are the age groups for this

MissInternetEarth's picture
Hi TurquoisePetal2000,
I agree, the poems are excellent!
The age groups are 7-8 year olds and 9-11 year olds.

Best wishes,
MissInternetEarth
LearnEnglish Kids team 
DiamondWasp's picture

i luv my homealot

DukeSportWizard's picture

I am in this book and my poem is about snake.

OrangeOrangeRain's picture

I like to learn english but I love my mom and dady. I love animals and I like to play toys.

MissGuitarPineapple's picture

My home a peaceful place to live. With the ones who love me. Ny home a peaceful place for me to live.

AgentGlitterSkates's picture

I love my home.

LadyPurpleWater's picture

That was nice listen to mine:Title:Gratitude:Have you heard of gratitude.It is the right kind of attitude.Everyone has to smile.In a way it will be seen from a mile.A little pepper and salt.And 20 grains of malt.Now here is a painful message i will send.My poem has to come to THE END
 

QueenGemCelebrity's picture

this is a poem i wrote
the birthday party
im haveing a party.
iv got to get ready
im waering my favourite dress
i lookreally pretty
i probley look the best

WowPlatinumFolk's picture

Very good poems, isn't it?

QueenTuneOcean's picture

I want have a job in britishcouncil.org how here :(

MissAngelViolin's picture

 Hi Miss Lucky Mouse. I want to know if there are any competitions which's entries are open. I badly want to take part because I get so bored, only excitement is this website. It would be something to do. Please reply soon.
By,
Miss Angel Violen

WowScalyMobile's picture

hi mister i read your message it is realy nice

Duchess Mega Wand's picture

Dear MissAngelViolin,

We don't have a competition at the moment but we'd love to hear from you. Why don't you look at the 'Your turn' section and write to us about your favourite topics?

What kind of competitions do you like? We'll tell you and all our members as soon as we have news about a new competition.

DuchessMegaWand

LearnEnglish Kids Team

SapphireRainforestTower's picture

YOU MUST LİSTEN THAT SONG (THATS THE WAY)

SapphireRainforestTower's picture

i like it all

HiNeverAlways's picture

Here is a poem I wrote when I was 7 years old:

A Trip To The Zoo

I want to go to the zoo
To play with animals too
Swing in the trees
And play with bees

I will take a break
With ducks in lake
I fly with a butterfly
And so I say Goodbye

Like it? Hope so! Bye!

From: Hi Never Always

DoctorRapPoppy's picture

honestly i could do better lol joking

CoolMist5000's picture

...
Oh,life-life!!!
I have so many things to do today!..
It's wind of life, it gives me smile,
Oh, life-life and for me it's OK!..
...
And I;ve got a lot of other big and small poems too!..

CoolMist5000's picture

Give me information about this competition, please.
           ...
Something strange is in my heart...
Asking my dreams to fly ...
        Among the stars...          
      But I cry...
On this sunny day...
Not in dreams, in realy!!!

CoolMist5000's picture

Yes, for me this topic is very interesting, becaurse I'm a poet - a young poet.=)
Sorry, but now I can't write here any poems...=(
P. S.: Something strange is in my heart...
         Asking my dreams to fly....
             Among the stars...

GreyStarfish1's picture

 Here is onemore,
PINKY IS MY DOLL
pinky is my doll
she is six inches tall
her hair is very long she lives with a ben
who's ten
pinky is my doll
she is six inches tall
 
Hadia Sabah

PrincessWhiteFirefly's picture

Miss Lucky Mouse, thanks
for telling me but 
is there a competition of writing
stories?
I love writing stories especially
one of my own!!!! <3

LadyFashionDrum's picture

Hi Miss lucky Mouse,
What has to be the news? Anything we like or what? You said earlier that the prizes are video cameras right? Is there any age group and what's the closing date?

PrincessPixiePea's picture

Hi Lady Fashion Drum

You can choose what the news is about. Use these questions to help you:

  • What happened?
  • When did it happen?
  • Who was there?
  • Where were you?
  • How did you feel?

You have to be aged between 6 and 12.

The closing date is October 15th.

Have fun making your video!

Make sure you and your parents look at the instructions and terms and conditions first. http://learnenglishkids.britishcouncil.org/en/competition

Princess Pixie Pea (website editor)

LadyFashionDrum's picture

Dear Miss Lucky Mouse,
Thank you. Yes, I'm trying for the video competition too. But I don't know what to do there. I read the terms and conditions too. Can you please explain it to me in a better way and i like to know what the prizes are?

MissLuckyMouse's picture

Hi

For the video competition, you have to make a short video to tell us some news. Your news can be anything you like. Then upload the video to our site. The prizes are video cameras and the winner will have their video made with the characters from What's Your News?

Good luck! Miss Lucky Mouse (website editor)

LadyFashionDrum's picture

Dear MissLuckyMouse,
You seem very nice and friendly and I thought of asking you something. Is there any story writing competitions in this website? Because as I can't write poems I can write stories well. Can you please inform me about any story writing competitions?
 

MissLuckyMouse's picture

 Hi Lady Fashion Drum

At the moment we don't have any story writing competitions, but it's a very good idea! If you like making short videos we have a video competition open at the moment. Have a look at the information on the home page to find out more. 

Best wishes, Miss Lucky Mouse (website editor) 

SwimmingDaffodilSocks's picture

Oh yeah aged 11

SwimmingDaffodilSocks's picture

All of the poetries are nice and the first best is pablo vicent from france bravo to him

WhiteStarlightPiano's picture

 
Exciting
a liftoff
Exciting
a liftoff
in a rocket
Exciting
a liftoff
in a rocket
with 5,4,3,2,1...
Exciting
a liftoff
in a rocket
with 5,4,3,2,1...
KABOOM!
Exciting
a liftoff
in a rocket
with 5,4,3,2,1...
KABOOM!
with 58.000 km p/h
Exciting
a liftoff
in a rocket
with 5,4,3,2,1...
KABOOM!
with 58.000 km p/h
a sneaky landing on the moon
White Starlight Piano
 
 

DJAugustForever's picture

I love writing poems! Here are some of them:                                                 A Polar Bear                                                                                                                                                                            Glorious white,                                                                                                                                                                         A wonderful sight!                                                                                                                                                                   Soft and furry,                                                                                                                                                                          Lovely to burry!                                                                                                                                                                       It's home is full of ice,                                                                                                                                                            Look's quite nice.                                                                                                                                                                     Endangered specie,                               My Little Sister                                                                                                                                 Save it please!!!!!!!!!!!
I love my little sister,
her way of talking & whispers.
She jumps like a butterfly,
To me; she never tells a lie.
She's a bit naughty,
But she's not at all haughty.
Her favourite food is a tasty bun
Living with her is like a cup of fun.
 

MissLuckyMouse's picture

Hi DJ August Forever,

Wow! Great poems! Thanks a lot for sharing them.

Miss Lucky Mouse (website editor)

PrincessWhiteFirefly's picture

                                                                  ~Choclatety Home~
I once knew a chocolate house it had everything that's
chocolatety. A liquerice sofa, a chocolatety roof,
lolipop chimney, an ice cream cabinet.
Here oh here my strawberry cat that went far away 
from the Chocolatety home............
 

PrincessWhiteFirefly's picture

Miss Lucky Mouse what's a poem?

MissLuckyMouse's picture

Hi Princess White Firefly

I think you know what a poem is. You've just written one yourself! Well done.

Miss Lucky Mouse (website editor)

PrincessWhiteFirefly's picture

Roses are red, Violets are Blue, Sugar is sweet and so are you!
B-) cool huh?

RubyMartianMartian's picture

 i'm just saying my poem.. in case.
 
The moon is white,
My house is yellow,
It's such a sight
Oh it's so mellow
When i look
I feel all good
the bad it shook
right out of me.

HoppingSchoolLake's picture

hi website editor u bust be lala  when you are mad i am 10 and we get laptops in the fithgrade yay us

LadyEmeraldAngel's picture

I was thinking about something,
a warm bed,
in a big house,
and a warm cup of hot chocolate
A nice smell of roses in the room
and
a nice blue sky outside the window
The moon was sparkled in the sky
I could feel a wind coming throught the half open window
 and shivered
Then I opened my eyes and I Came back to reality...
 I was outside in the green forest
alone in the dark
I was freezing
My dream will never come true...
/ Me...

MissLuckyMouse's picture

Hi Lady Emerald Angel,

What a beautiful poem. I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you.

Best wishes, Miss Lucky Mouse (website editor)

LadyPigeonPiglet's picture

Hi Miss Lucky Mouse!
I'm new here! I love this site.
 

MissLuckyMouse's picture

Hi! 

Welcome to LearnEnglish Kids. We're happy you're here! 

Miss Lucky Mouse (website editor)

WickedBlackVampire's picture

 cool poems.......!!!! ( i like " Different Home " )

NaturalDiamond50's picture

MissLuckyMouse you seem very nice do you want to be friends on here?

MissLuckyMouse's picture

Thank you Natural Diamond50! 

I am friends with everyone on LearnEnglish Kids! :)

Have a nice day! Miss Lucky Mouse (website editor)

RubyMartianMartian's picture

 That's... very nice of you to accept the friendship of each kid. I now feel happy knowing were all friends here. You have MADE my day.

MissMusicAmethyst's picture

This year I started to write many types of poems . If  there are any competitions I would like to join .

GreenGrey2's picture

hi,Miss lucky mouse:
would you please tell me how to take a part in your competions.
couse i realy do like competions,but do i have to travel to the britsh council or i can join you on the website.
with love,yomna