Poetry Competition 2010
Congratulations and thank you to everyone who took part in this year's poetry competition. In the international learners' categories there were 753 entries, from 31 different countries!
You can read all the winning poems on the Children's Poetry Bookshelf website, and we are very happy and proud to publish the winning poems from the international competition here. The quality and level of the poems is amazing, so well done to you all!
Winners in 7-8 age group, International Learners of English
Home
By Ishu Gupta, aged 8, from India (first prize)
My sweet home! My sweet home!
I love my home! I love my home!
If wind comes who will protect me?
If winter comes who will protect me?
My home, my home nice for me.
My home, my home a temple for me.
If summer comes who will protect me?
If rain comes who will protect me?
My home, my home best for me.
My home, my home a mosque for me.
If night comes who will shelter me?
If storm comes who will shelter me?
My home, my home is good for me.
A majestic creation of Thee.
There is no place like house, home
By Melanie Duarte Sanchez, aged 8, from Mexico (second prize)
There are many things we call a house,
Like small dark holes in the walls for the noisy mouse.
Tall windy nests in the trees are what flying birds like the most,
But dirty deep holes in the ground are cosy for rabbits and moles.
Dogs and kittens sleep in soft pillows,
And little spiders make webs in the corners of some windows.
Crocodiles and snakes enjoy muddy swamps,
But beavers prefer to build their own dams.
Fish and whales live in the wet blue sea,
And wood or brick buildings are houses for you and me.
But what really matters is:
To have a home where you can feel safe and free.
Different Home
By Tong Ho Kan Kenny, aged 8 from Hong Kong (third prize)
One man,
he has a home.
It is a bus,
because he is a bus driver.
One old man,
He has no home,
because he is a ghost.
One super man,
he has a home.
It is the space!
My Darling Home
By Ada Ciontu, aged 7, from Romania (highly commended)
When I go home,
I eat, I sleep,
I colour, I bother
And no-one minds.
I watch TV
And get a treat,
Even I trick.
I take a shower,
Put on a flower,
Pull out my baby teeth
And smile a bit.
When I feel blue,
Mom and Dad “moo”,
And you can see my smile,
Out from a mile.
Oh, I love my darling home,
Where everybody loves me
Just the way I am.
Home for Everyone
By Bohdan Meleshko, aged 7, from the Ukraine (highly commended)
My home’s a country house,
my teacher’s home’s a flat
a hole’s a home for a mouse,
a snail’s home’s on its back.
All beings have their own homes.
Homes can be big or small.
I am so sorry for all those
who have no home at all.
The world will be more fun
if there’s a home for everyone!
Winners in 9-11 age group, International Learners of English
A house we built together
By Cristina Vrincianu, aged 11, from Romania (first prize)
Our house is a house.
We built it together.
We have laid every brick one by one.
We have nailed every board, one blow at a time.
Our house is a house.
We built it together.
Not every board is perfect, some are not even straight.
Some walls are built in the wrong place.
We must carefully remove those boards
We must carefully remove those walls.
We must rebuild them in the right place.
We must replace each board one by one
Until the holes are all filled
Until all the walls are in the right place.
When we have finished
We can stand back and say
“This is our house,
A house we built together!”
“Home – my friend”
By Mikolaj Marsy, aged 11, from Poland (second prize)
My walls are yellow like sunrays in the morning
My roof is red like maple leaves in Autumn
My door is brown like sweet chocolate boiling
My windows – limping like lakes in the mountains.
I’m as old as your grandpa who’s collecting stamps
I’m as safe as the money in Swiss banks
I’m as happy as your best friends
I’m as warm as flames in the fireplace.
I don’t want to leave you
I like when you are in
I hate when you go out
I love when we are near.
Home?
By Anastasi Panagiotopoulou, aged 9, from Greece (third prize)
For a fox, it’s its den,
For a snail, it’s its shell,
For a bird, it’s the sky,
For me, it’s my school.
You’re probably wondering why.
Am I a fool?
I come from a broken family.
My school makes me feel like a baby kangaroo
in its pouch.
Safe, warm and wanted.
School, sweet school...
Moon in the Sky
By Pablo Vincent, aged 11, from France (highly commended)
Flowers in the sitting room,
Rain in the garden
lights off
I’m in bed
I dream a house
By Lorenzo Di Biagio and Luca Oleari, aged 10, from Italy
I go to the supermarket and I write a list.
I buy a golden wall,
an ice door
and seven floors.
A diamond chair,
a collection of Montblanc pens.
A fire disc,
a metal chimney
a silver roof.
An orange fridge
an LED 4D TV.
A rock window.
A chocolate table,
a water armchair, a pair of pears
A crystal bed and a good dad.
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I want have a job in britishcouncil.org how here :(
Hi Miss Lucky Mouse. I want to know if there are any competitions which's entries are open. I badly want to take part because I get so bored, only excitement is this website. It would be something to do. Please reply soon.
By,
Miss Angel Violen
hi mister i read your message it is realy nice
Dear MissAngelViolin,
We don't have a competition at the moment but we'd love to hear from you. Why don't you look at the 'Your turn' section and write to us about your favourite topics?
What kind of competitions do you like? We'll tell you and all our members as soon as we have news about a new competition.
DuchessMegaWand
LearnEnglish Kids Team
YOU MUST LİSTEN THAT SONG (THATS THE WAY)
i like it all
Here is a poem I wrote when I was 7 years old:
A Trip To The Zoo
I want to go to the zoo
To play with animals too
Swing in the trees
And play with bees
I will take a break
With ducks in lake
I fly with a butterfly
And so I say Goodbye
Like it? Hope so! Bye!
From: Hi Never Always
honestly i could do better lol joking
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Oh,life-life!!!
I have so many things to do today!..
It's wind of life, it gives me smile,
Oh, life-life and for me it's OK!..
...
And I;ve got a lot of other big and small poems too!..
Give me information about this competition, please.
...
Something strange is in my heart...
Asking my dreams to fly ...
Among the stars...
But I cry...
On this sunny day...
Not in dreams, in realy!!!
Yes, for me this topic is very interesting, becaurse I'm a poet - a young poet.=)
Sorry, but now I can't write here any poems...=(
P. S.: Something strange is in my heart...
Asking my dreams to fly....
Among the stars...
Here is onemore,
PINKY IS MY DOLL
pinky is my doll
she is six inches tall
her hair is very long she lives with a ben
who's ten
pinky is my doll
she is six inches tall
Hadia Sabah
Miss Lucky Mouse, thanks
for telling me but
is there a competition of writing
stories?
I love writing stories especially
one of my own!!!! <3
Hi Miss lucky Mouse,
What has to be the news? Anything we like or what? You said earlier that the prizes are video cameras right? Is there any age group and what's the closing date?
Hi Lady Fashion Drum
You can choose what the news is about. Use these questions to help you:
You have to be aged between 6 and 12.
The closing date is October 15th.
Have fun making your video!
Make sure you and your parents look at the instructions and terms and conditions first. http://learnenglishkids.britishcouncil.org/en/competition
Princess Pixie Pea (website editor)
Dear Miss Lucky Mouse,
Thank you. Yes, I'm trying for the video competition too. But I don't know what to do there. I read the terms and conditions too. Can you please explain it to me in a better way and i like to know what the prizes are?
Hi
For the video competition, you have to make a short video to tell us some news. Your news can be anything you like. Then upload the video to our site. The prizes are video cameras and the winner will have their video made with the characters from What's Your News?
Good luck! Miss Lucky Mouse (website editor)
Dear MissLuckyMouse,
You seem very nice and friendly and I thought of asking you something. Is there any story writing competitions in this website? Because as I can't write poems I can write stories well. Can you please inform me about any story writing competitions?
Hi Lady Fashion Drum
At the moment we don't have any story writing competitions, but it's a very good idea! If you like making short videos we have a video competition open at the moment. Have a look at the information on the home page to find out more.
Best wishes, Miss Lucky Mouse (website editor)
Oh yeah aged 11
All of the poetries are nice and the first best is pablo vicent from france bravo to him
Exciting
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in a rocket
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KABOOM!
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KABOOM!
with 58.000 km p/h
Exciting
a liftoff
in a rocket
with 5,4,3,2,1...
KABOOM!
with 58.000 km p/h
a sneaky landing on the moon
White Starlight Piano
I love writing poems! Here are some of them: A Polar Bear Glorious white, A wonderful sight! Soft and furry, Lovely to burry! It's home is full of ice, Look's quite nice. Endangered specie, My Little Sister Save it please!!!!!!!!!!!
I love my little sister,
her way of talking & whispers.
She jumps like a butterfly,
To me; she never tells a lie.
She's a bit naughty,
But she's not at all haughty.
Her favourite food is a tasty bun
Living with her is like a cup of fun.
Hi DJ August Forever,
Wow! Great poems! Thanks a lot for sharing them.
Miss Lucky Mouse (website editor)
~Choclatety Home~
I once knew a chocolate house it had everything that's
chocolatety. A liquerice sofa, a chocolatety roof,
lolipop chimney, an ice cream cabinet.
Here oh here my strawberry cat that went far away
from the Chocolatety home............
Miss Lucky Mouse what's a poem?
Hi Princess White Firefly
I think you know what a poem is. You've just written one yourself! Well done.
Miss Lucky Mouse (website editor)
Roses are red, Violets are Blue, Sugar is sweet and so are you!
B-) cool huh?
i'm just saying my poem.. in case.
The moon is white,
My house is yellow,
It's such a sight
Oh it's so mellow
When i look
I feel all good
the bad it shook
right out of me.
hi website editor u bust be lala when you are mad i am 10 and we get laptops in the fithgrade yay us
I was thinking about something,
a warm bed,
in a big house,
and a warm cup of hot chocolate
A nice smell of roses in the room
and
a nice blue sky outside the window
The moon was sparkled in the sky
I could feel a wind coming throught the half open window
and shivered
Then I opened my eyes and I Came back to reality...
I was outside in the green forest
alone in the dark
I was freezing
My dream will never come true...
/ Me...
Hi Lady Emerald Angel,
What a beautiful poem. I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you.
Best wishes, Miss Lucky Mouse (website editor)
Hi Miss Lucky Mouse!
I'm new here! I love this site.
Hi!
Welcome to LearnEnglish Kids. We're happy you're here!
Miss Lucky Mouse (website editor)
cool poems.......!!!! ( i like " Different Home " )
MissLuckyMouse you seem very nice do you want to be friends on here?
Thank you Natural Diamond50!
I am friends with everyone on LearnEnglish Kids! :)
Have a nice day! Miss Lucky Mouse (website editor)
That's... very nice of you to accept the friendship of each kid. I now feel happy knowing were all friends here. You have MADE my day.
This year I started to write many types of poems . If there are any competitions I would like to join .
hi,Miss lucky mouse:
would you please tell me how to take a part in your competions.
couse i realy do like competions,but do i have to travel to the britsh council or i can join you on the website.
with love,yomna
Hi Green Grey2,
When we have competitions on the site we will give you all the information here on LearnEnglish Kids, ok? Don't worry - we will put the information on the homepage so you won't miss it. ;)
Best wishes, Miss Lucky Mouse (website editor)
hi
Dear Miss Lucky Mouse,
Are there any other competition come????
Please inform me.
Thank You
From:Lavonne
Hi Doctor Magic Swan and Princess Gem Ghost,
We are planning some more competitions. Keep an eye on the site to find out more in the next few months. Ok?
Best wishes, Miss Lucky Mouse (website editor)
Dear MissLuckyMouse,
is there any other competittion beside the poetry competition?
could anyone told me what is the topic for 2011 ???
Dear MissLuckyMouse,
Can i know how do i want to participate in this poetry competition.And i really need your information for this poetry competition... Because i would like to participate this competition very much . :)
I hope you will give me some information about this poetry competition for 2011...
Hi Princess White Jewel,
You will have to wait for information about this year's poetry competition. We usually give the information in June or July. Ok? It's great that you want to take part. You can practise writing some poems at home so you are ready to write a brilliant one for the competiton.
Have a nice day!
Miss Lucky Mouse (website editor)
Thankyou very much MissLuckyMouse for your information to me..
It is a great pleasure to be a member in this wonderful website.If youre not mine can you tell me how to make my poem clear so that people can understand and could you teach me how to write a poem because in Malaysia school we usually study how to wtite poem in grade 6. So I hope you can... :)