Old Possum's poetry competition 2009
Lots of you entered the Old Possum's children's poetry competition which we ran for National Poetry Day 2009 with the Children's Poetry Bookshelf.
We are really happy to announce the winners of the competition. The poems are all written by children around the world who are learning English, and they are all about heroes and heroines, the topic of this year's competition. Read the poems below - aren't they fantastic? Book prizes are on their way!
The photo is of the winners of the poetry competition in the UK. The winners are with Roger Stevens and John Agard, two great children's poets.
Do you love love writing poems? If you are a member of LearnEnglish Kids, you can send us your poem using the comments box below.
Winners in 7-8 age group, International Learners of English
Hero in the Moon
By Leticia Hernández Navarro, aged 8, from Spain (first prize)
The sky is blue, the breeze off the sea
Is fresh. The cars pass in all colours
And in the moon there is you
With all my hopes.
A Fireman
By Helena Jelenska, aged 7, from Poland (second prize)
There was Ola and Kasia.
Ola was often visiting Kasia.
Once Kasia came to Ola.
Kasia laughed looking at burned cloth.
Then Ola’s Mom said:
Once when Ola had 2 years
We were in a block.
Everything was on fire
Everybody was running out.
Ola stayed.
Then came a fireman.
He wrapped Ola in his coat.
A board fell on him
As he went out.
He was taken to the hospital.
There he died.
But Ola was safe.
Nana
By Morgan Rich, aged 8, from Qatar (third prize)
On my Grandma’s farm, I hear the needle touching the fabric on the sewing machine.
On my Grandma’s farm, I see tall trees and barns.
On my Grandma’s farm, I taste freshly canned jam: strawberry, blueberry or plum.
On my Grandma’s farm, I sink my fingers into the cookie dough we roll out together.
On my Grandma’s farm, I smell our cookies baking in the oven.
Treasure Map
By Carnevale Rachele, aged 8, from Italy (highly commended)
One day I went out and I saw my mum.
She told me that she'd found a chest.
I asked her to show me the contents of the chest
and she held out an old, grey sheet.
Oh, how this scroll looked like a treasure map,
With plotted tracks, rocks and a sunken ship,
with a cross, marking place, where a treasure lay,
on the island, which name sounded strange to me.
Hey, Mum, we must start for Green Mountain's Peaks,
where rivers are blue, and the air is fresh.
We'll burrow a hole in the firm rocky ground,
to pull out the jewels that lie in it.
(Inspired by Treasure Island by Robert Louis Stevenson; my hero is Jim Hawkins)
Winners in 9-11 age group, International Learners of English
Sweeping Sound
By Maria Jelenska, aged 11, from Poland (first prize)
Sweep, sweep, sweeping sound,
On the floor by the door.
Winter comes.
I come home to eat hot soup
And he, without lunch,
In the winter that gleams
The snow he cleans.
It’s summer.
It is hot like in a pot.
Vacation time starts now,
But how he Mr Sweeper sweeps!
All days, throughout long holidays,
Every day he says to me,
“Hello, great day I say.”
He is a hero and no-one sees
That he is one.
Grandmother
By Daryna Pospolitak, aged 9, from Ukraine (second prize)
My hero is my grandmother,
Taken to Siberia
Without her mum and dad.
She went with her grandmother and granddad.
It took two weeks
Freezing
Wolves and bears in the forest.
The only thing to eat
Frozen potatoes
Dug from fields.
She walked seven kilometres to school
Picked flowers and collected nuts to sell
To pay for books.
Twelve years in Siberia
Then returned to Ukraine.
All people in Siberia at that time
Are heroes.
Einstein
By Konstandinos Vorvis, aged 9, from Greece (third prize)
Einstein, Einstein
You have the brightest mind
You are of the greatest men
In the world.
You look like crazy
But you are a genius
You look old
But you have a brilliant mind.
Your eyes are so clever
Your theory is so perfect.
You are the greatest scientist
Einstein, oh Einstein.
Your hair is like a bird’s nest
You smile like a clown
I would like so much
To be like you
When I grow up
But it’s so difficult, so difficult!
You are a magician of science
Give us your light.
My Beloved Teacher – Ms K
By Onneetse Nthebolang, aged 11, from Botswana (highly commended)
My teacher, my heroine,
You are very gorgeous as
A blooming spring flower,
Polite as a sheep and
Helpful and caring as a grandmother.
What a powerful person who cares
About everybody!
You shape us for tomorrow’s
Future. Shape us with a rare,
Rapier of your rapid, “Where is my
Home-work” and “You can do better
Than this.” How lucky we are
To have such a nice and caring
Person!
My teacher, my heroine, you are
As strong as a ferry, a ferry
Which has the strength to load
More things, and you too have
The strength to load these things.
Like being our nurse, our lawyer, our
Entertainer. Voice so sweet like piped
Music, music that always makes us
Merry, music with the power to
Make us rise and shine.
The Burial
By Sagnik Bhattacharya, aged 9, from India (highly commended)
Brave soldiers were they,
In their coffins they lay.
Garlands of flowers covered them,
A few know their name.
Their families bitterly cry,
As they bid their final goodbye.
The commander hides a frown,
When the coffins are put down,
To see the young soldiers dead,
Lying on their flower bedecked bed.
The bugles blare,
Strangers stare.
Over with the burial,
Who will remember their laurels?
Forgotten soon are their glories.
These heroes leave an unfinished story.

Comments
Can't Wait for P1 School by Charmayne
No one can guess which school I might be going,
what things I will be doing,
and what food I will be eating.
Imaginations are bouncing in my head,
my legs are bounding up and down.
Can't wait to fall asleep on my bed
and wake up the next morning,
to make my way to school on a sunny,
and windy day.
To guess who my new teachers and friends will be!
YEAH POEMS ARE VERY VERY VERY NICE ESPECIALLY YOURS
poems are coooooool
goooood
Hello everybody...!
I like your poems. And good luck...!
See You
My friends and i want to play
You bring in lot of showers
And bloom all the flowers
You fill the sky with black clouds
Thundering really loud
You fill the playgrounds with water
Messing the pots of the potter
Sometimes you rain heavily or drizzle
Which makes me freeze and frizzle
Rain ! Rain ! go to spain
Never show your face again
I LEARNED ALL THESE POEMS BY HEART.....................
my pc
my tool
my traesure
mint poems
i love einstine most,keep it up
nice job ,keep it up
2. GUYS U ALL ROXXXXXXXXXXX
I like football!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Books
Books Books are my heroes
oh you give me so much knowledge
oh books my books
i cant go to bed till my mommy reads you
and i don't get out of bed in morning till
mamma darling reads me some more.
books books i love you in all colours and hues
i love fairy tales and rhymes
but above all i love my science
books books what a wonderful gift to mankind
books you are so kind
books my hero
buring bright every night
THE MOON
White and round
In the sky i found
The moon! The moon! The moon.
It changes it's shape
Like a ball of round tape
The moon! The moon! The moon.
It shines in the night.
High up! shining so bright.
The moon! The moon! The Moon.
Like a cookie in the sky
Like a big white pie
The moon! The moon! The moon.
I wait for the night.
To see the moon shining bright.
The Rain
by Sahithya, aged 9, from India
Rain ! Rain ! go away.
My friends and i want to play
You bring in lot of showers
And bloom all the flowers
You fill the sky with black clouds
Thundering really loud
You fill the playgrounds with water
Messing the pots of the potter
Sometimes you rain heavily or drizzle
Which makes me freeze and frizzle
Rain ! Rain ! go to spain
Never show your face again
You guys are really great!
My favourite was Daryna Pospolitak's "Grandmother", the language is simple though striking.